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Nice :)

That was kinda good man, there are parts of the song that could use some work and by that I mean some sounds sound a bit too distorted especially the guitar part and they prevent me to crank up the volume (and I have a good amplifier)

PROS:
I like the basic melody of the song, the guitar solo is cool, the song has a good tempo, the lyrics are nice and sound good with a vocoder and it's nice to listen to it in a loop

CONS:
You have a nice voice but the part without the vocoder could have used more rehearsing, and as I said the guitar is cool, but a bit too distorted.

OVERALL:
It's not that bad, it's quite good actually (the song was in a loop the whole time while I was writing this, and I think that says allot ;-) 5/5 10/10 ...gave you a high score because I suppose you also make solo projects like me...not the best thing on Newgrounds by all means, but the song shows that you have good talent and time will only show improvement, I'm sure of it.

merlin responds:

Thanks for such a great review! It's always so refreshing to hear input in a sincere way. I know the EQing on the song is a little off, but it always seems by the time I finish a song, and am about to wrap it up (with eqing and recording vocals) I'm usually so tired of hearing the song that I tend to half ass it. Guess you caught me! Once again, thank you so much for your review, and I'll be sure to keep on writing!

Quite good...

...if you did it all by yourself, if that's the case you deserve 5/5 10/10, and mainly because you made an all original melody which is always a bonus, this is also one of your better tunes.

Parlux responds:

Thanks and i might say what a head on review

nice...

...I like it, good choice of sounds and nice progression till 1:52 but the part between 1:52-2:17 gets a bit repetitive (nothing too annoying but you could have expanded the melody a bit) after that it's all good. Gave you 5 & 9 (but it deserves a 9.5 ;)

R-VeeBee responds:

:) Thanks man. You're totally right!

sorry man...

...but this is not that good, I gave you a 3/5 & 5/10...

PROS:
Intro
false sounding notes
"trance" sound
someone can build upon it

CONS:
00:40-2:42 WTF? just looping over and over... ....and over...and.... :(

Come on man...you can do better than that...

ClosTopete responds:

sorry i thoght it was sorry bad too but u hve to addmit it some of it is predy cachy

...don't worry...

...I gave you 5/5 for effort, and I'll give you 10 stars.., not to sound like a "pedo" , but man...are you really 15? you've got skill dude ;) I hope you do well in future.

NOTICE: some of the sounds like the "choir" and some of the "strings" sound great, but there are some "midi-like" instruments that could sound better.

BowserThedestructive responds:

Eh i know but i assure you none are midi all of my instruments are hQ instruments still working in EQ mastering wise but im getting better at mastering the frequencies :) but ya im 15 :) 16 on june 18th :)

I like it :)

If you made this all by yourself (not using any pre-made loops) then you deserve this perfect score which I gave you...

5/5 & 10/10 ...surfin' the web and chillin' to this tune ;-)

XayberOptix responds:

Yes, I made this all by myself. There are no pre-made loops anywhere in this song. Each instrument track was performed and recorded separately by me. Unless someone likes Jazz, they won't like this song very much; but I see that you have an appreciation for Jazz. Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for your review.

Hmm...

...love the intro but the choice of bass sound is not as good, the main melody is quite strong but to a certain point because it gets a bit repetitive in the later part of the song. If only you tried to expand the melody a bit...but it's cool...

...I gave you 5/5 and 7/10 because I know you can do better ;)

DJ-Frosted responds:

i guess... :P but im lazy lol

Pretty cool...

...I love the original and this version is no exception, the beat is kinda strange at first but I got used to it.

SCORE:
- 5/5
- 9/10

I hope you guys upload more of this stuff in the near future, and I wish you the best of luck in your singing careers.

FolegAlmighty responds:

Aha, thanks for the review. And yes, the beatboxing is off. Unfortunately, the source file got corrupted so I am unable to fix it.

Oh, and it's just one guy singing. Just me. :P

Hahaha...

...pure greatness !!! The awkwardness is spot on :D

5/5
10/10
(but you have to record the full song.., please !! :)

FolegAlmighty responds:

Awkward is what I do best.

hehe...

...you made me grab my guitar and start playing the duet ;)

Soundshifter responds:

nice :) im glad. thanks for listening

My main focus on Newgrounds is to share music that I produce in my spare time. I value every constructive review I get, and those always keep me motivated. Enjoy my channel, cheers ;-)

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