Nice :)
That was kinda good man, there are parts of the song that could use some work and by that I mean some sounds sound a bit too distorted especially the guitar part and they prevent me to crank up the volume (and I have a good amplifier)
PROS:
I like the basic melody of the song, the guitar solo is cool, the song has a good tempo, the lyrics are nice and sound good with a vocoder and it's nice to listen to it in a loop
CONS:
You have a nice voice but the part without the vocoder could have used more rehearsing, and as I said the guitar is cool, but a bit too distorted.
OVERALL:
It's not that bad, it's quite good actually (the song was in a loop the whole time while I was writing this, and I think that says allot ;-) 5/5 10/10 ...gave you a high score because I suppose you also make solo projects like me...not the best thing on Newgrounds by all means, but the song shows that you have good talent and time will only show improvement, I'm sure of it.